it needs something...
and i know exactly what it needs.
NEEDS BASS LINE!
never heard those tinklish backroung bass instrument?they're what makes the song make me wanna dance.
you tried making it loop didn't you :P?
has great synths at great places.
looks like the real thing,but in better quality.
this song has 9/10 and 5/5 in my opinion,and thus till you submit a version with bassline.but i DO have a question,
is it a redux?
Yes, it is a Redux, I would have made a bassline although I wasn't willing to format one :P
WARNING: USEFULL USELESS COMMENT INCOMING!
the one who rated this a one doesn't seem to know that 1-bombing isn't ne better than 0-bombing >.>.in fact,it is harder to equalify the scores after someone zero-bombed a track than thereafter.
or maybe it depends of the user's voting power?ne ways,this rating of one isnt for this track.this track is great.
thank you so much, lol and really clever and elaborate way of complimenting my track thanks again :)
you know where i would see this tune?
i hope you know what game i'dd see this in.
i'dd see this in minecraft,actually.all the tracks of the game r mostly pretty much like this.
the little clicks everywhere are making it sound like bad quality tho..
the rippling water sound isnt of too much,but those r.
by the way,for a calm song,i saw way more quiet,even for my high quality surround earphones.i noticed it loops kinda well.
really good and calm arrangement.
this makes me feel like that music would play as you are in the spot you go to when you want to be alone,how calm it is..
everytime i listen to this,i feel like i'm in a cave.is that normal?
ne ways,great job.
Thanks for the kind words.
Yeah I put the "little clicks" in to make it sound like an old record, so the quality was semi-intentional but I do definitely need to boost the volume lol.
Anyway yeah thanks for the review xD
for a joke,
its not really funny.not cuz it made me angry,no.
because first of all,when you say "stupid little preview" as a title,you kinda know what's coming.
further after,you underestimate your loop tallent it seems >.>
first loop i ever hear wich loops perfectly on NEWGROUNDS or windows media player.
now,to the music review.
i like the electric synths,they give a feeling of emptyness.
with the...idk how its called D: instrument,
kinda sounds like you're a member of the onu (an army that is made to protect each nations,but can't shoot,even tho their guns are full of ammo.)
feels like you're one of them after a tragedy.
for example,seeing thousands of peoples getting killed in front of us,without having the right to help them,since you can't use that useless gun.
now you're back from there,and you're feeling remorse,you stop believing that humanity is on the good side,and you turn paranoiac.
thats the kind of feeling "a total joke" gave me.
make more o' those.you know how to express feelings trough music (even if it wasnt ur goal.
Sorry for the crazy delay in response. Thank you so much for the kind words! I have continued to release full length tracks on my bandcamp and soundcloud if you're still interested. Links can be found in my profile.
Thank you so much!
to me,
title doesn't quite fit. idk,i'dd see this more in wii sport resort or while tanning into the sun.
somehow feels a little bit tropical.
background beat reminds me of when you get the star in super mario bros O.o
this song feels different from ur other ones.feels more on the trance side.
kinda loops well somehow.
nothing else pretty much to say this time.
Pilotwings ring any bells :P
actually...
if your goal was for it to be different,well...it failed but didnt fail.
instead of feeling all happy it felt kinda like you're fighting a boss in megaman.
its still super fast.
except from that,as always,it's relly well done!
if you think that's repetitive,ur repeating urself too much.
hehe,get it :P?
ok,back to talkin'.
are those simbals reversed?cuz it sounds like it.
the quality is good.only thing i didn't like is when i heard the music starting to be less and less loud...make that being after 7 minutes D:
except from 10/10 5/5,i only have one thing to say.
more has to come
I meant different in feeling. Normally I do melodic based trance at 140bpm, this is much more rhythmic. And it's 160bpm :p
Also, the cymbals aren't reversed. Just compressed alot lol.
Like I said, rough outline :p.
I'm definitely gonna make this longer, and it'll have more variation.
idk what to say as a title,so lets get to review.
ok,you know how some peoples will quit a song if they dont find the beggining in itself good?
well here it would need a better beggining...
the beggining doesnt go with the bass.
i know that you were trying to make the song build ittself and not be too repetitive...i can see that.only,you should find a beggining that introduces a little bit more the feeling of taking a walk with a big smile (like the rest of the song)
instead of this creepy begining.the last tree notes of the beggining loop relly sucked on the song,no offence.
the name is kinda random o.O!
i hope you take concrete critiscism well,because i see something good comin' outta this.
-1 since for me its not done
-1 for creepy beggining.
if you can arrange those two things,ur in business for a 10/10 man.
I'm gonna have to agree with you about the beginning, i could've transitioned that much better.
though i should've put this in the author comment: this song is kind of a musical explanation of how i feel eating a delicious burrito. the begenning i am waiting and eager to eat it, then the first bite is when it gets all happy, and the fade out is the burrito being almost gone cuz i ate it too fast..
lol. this would probly be better in a video.
Thanks for the comment! :)
*Gives you a burrito*
you shure this is...in progress?
looks done to me. a version with lyrics would go well for this i think.
no flaws,fast and awesome lil' track.
might be a basic remake,it still sounds way better.idk y.
maybe the instrument choice?idk.
ne ways,all i have to say is:u got tallent.
make more
Glad to hear you enjoyed it. Maybe I'll try my hand at some other Homestuck songs in the near future.
normallement j'aime pas le blues,
mais sa sa vas automatiquement dans les fichiers exploration-dungeons
d'elder scrolls 4 oblivion.
je vois un peu d'espoir dedans.mais surtout du desespoir de cause.
mais bon,comme ils disent,"who cares?"
10/10, 5/5
haha merci
i see a scene...
a girl is brushing her hair while singing a song of her childhood...
she feels observed,and notices someone is looking at her,behind her.in the mirror.
she turns around to see nothing more than her room.
it just has this eery feeling...
i cant stand it,but i cant stop listening.your songs are soo good.
ur name makes you sound like a compositor in the times of bethoven
(this is meant to be a compliment,by the way)
really,the only thing i can say other than 10/10 5/5 is...
make more.
:D thank you! i'm currently making small pieces like this one for all kinds of projects so i'll be uploading more soon.
Hi, I'm GeekyGami. I used to go by AudioSkater on here, and Link-Linkerman on Deviantart. I do music, illustration, modding, 3D modeling, and play games.
I've recently been working on a webcomic.
Age 26, Male
Hyrule
Joined on 1/2/11
First time in Clock Town 
