you shure this is...in progress?
looks done to me. a version with lyrics would go well for this i think.
no flaws,fast and awesome lil' track.
might be a basic remake,it still sounds way better.idk y.
maybe the instrument choice?idk.
ne ways,all i have to say is:u got tallent.
make more
Glad to hear you enjoyed it. Maybe I'll try my hand at some other Homestuck songs in the near future.
kudo on this.
lots o' rhymes,it followed the subject,kinda.
it was funny to listen to.you have a good voice,dude.
i predict that this well be plagiarised by someone over youtube...wich would mean its great.
nothing pretty much to say on it...idk y.
but ik i want u to continue in the path of musix.
normallement j'aime pas le blues,
mais sa sa vas automatiquement dans les fichiers exploration-dungeons
d'elder scrolls 4 oblivion.
je vois un peu d'espoir dedans.mais surtout du desespoir de cause.
mais bon,comme ils disent,"who cares?"
10/10, 5/5
haha merci
i see a scene...
a girl is brushing her hair while singing a song of her childhood...
she feels observed,and notices someone is looking at her,behind her.in the mirror.
she turns around to see nothing more than her room.
it just has this eery feeling...
i cant stand it,but i cant stop listening.your songs are soo good.
ur name makes you sound like a compositor in the times of bethoven
(this is meant to be a compliment,by the way)
really,the only thing i can say other than 10/10 5/5 is...
make more.
:D thank you! i'm currently making small pieces like this one for all kinds of projects so i'll be uploading more soon.
i love it!
sounds kinda kingdom heart-ish.
great beat
great choice of instruments
great composition.
nuf' said to give a 10/10.
do me a promise...
make more,k?
Fun fact: Both the Mario and Luigi series and the Kingdom Hearts series were composed by the same woman, Yoko Shimomura. Anyway, thanks. And believe me, I don't intend to quit remixing any time soon.
the incomplete one
that would be a good name.
makes you feel as if there was something outta bounds-wich you need to be whole,as you know you feel empty.
or as when you have suffered the loss of the one you dearly beloved...the one who filled the eeriness and nothingness embodying itself in your heart.
dude,uk wut?u truly know how to express feelings in music.
truly,you'dd make wonderfull title schreens for kingdom hearts games.
gets a little bit loud tho.
9/10 5/5
wouldn't this rather fit more for a...
silver puppet maybe?idk.i listen to this and i think of pinochio.
uk those puppets with a stick in their backs wich are aranged like ragdolls wich you make dance on little platforms you place in between your legs and make them tremble? (whatever i said.)
ne ways,great stuff there.makes me think of good memories you have with a friend with whom you've just had a fight and feel a little bit bad.or like you lied to him...and your nose got bigger :P!sorry,cant get off pinochio's back xD.oops,i mean nose.my error.*ahem* ne ways,untill now i'dd download all you musics(wich i obviously did) since it seems i even felt like downloading them more than twice and not being able to cancel a copy of it.ne ways,you know how to rock without needing an electric guitar :P.
10/10 5/5
best rap song i ever heard.
and i dont like rap. first of all,be3cause it truly fits a game over screen,or a credits song when you won a game...on very easy after dying 20 times.
lots of rhymes
big,BIG lyrics.
it would need a space where it always says the same thing,while it sounds a little sadder,know what i mean?
background beat could have been better,really.how'bout putting a less repetive beat? -1 in my rating
maybe cutting the parts where you're taking your breath back? mostly near the "your equipment's faulty"
plus,it followed the rythm,contrarily to some people's rap songs <.<
ne ways,great stuff,but to me,it's not done yet.that is why you get a 9/10 outta me,without counting the background beat
sorry to say this,but..
it sounded better before.instruments were rather more epic.
this one irritates my ears a little,idk y...
and ne ways,i hate remix remixes.
this doesnt earn an ultimate zero,but it doesn't earn a 10 either.sounds like you weren't confident in the epicness of the original and made it turn out ...alienish
and in your first attempt to this song,i did not see jenova or zeromus...i saw a track that had taken a life of its own. this one sounds like a...well...replica.
-1 for the inconfidence
-1 for the instrumental choice
-1 for being too loud.
sorry.this review might be a little bit critical,but meh.that's my thoughts.
Well, you still gave it a 7 - not something to apologize for - and you're biased against remix remixes. So, I can't really complain, can I?
- Bitium
EDIT: Point. I wasn't confident in the epicness of the original - because the original wasn't that epic. -grin-
brilliant
really,this sounds great...except for one thing.
sounds too calm.did you by anny mean forget to put in a lil' custom beat?
would be way epicker.
could be looped too.
therefore,an 8/10.i hope you remake it,so i can vote a 10/10 :P
Hi, I'm GeekyGami. I used to go by AudioSkater on here, and Link-Linkerman on Deviantart. I do music, illustration, modding, 3D modeling, and play games.
I've recently been working on a webcomic.
Age 26, Male
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Joined on 1/2/11
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